He was disappointed with the number of responses he was receiving (although I think it’s important to keep in mind there are many reasons you may not get responses, not just how you write your email) As I talk about in my guide, I don’t believe anyone has the dating/realtionships thing fully figured out.
Some of us have more experience or better insight than others but at the end of the day we’re all just making our best guesses.
With that in mind, I’m not saying his emails are bad.
I just believe based on my own experience they can be improved upon because sometimes we make our first emails out to be more than they should be.
On the other hand, the i Pod was one of the most successful marketing campaigns ever created.